Marriage is an outdated institution
The world changes, so do people, that’s why year by year we are
acquiring new problems, and issues that are to be urgently discussed. It’s a
well- known fact that today people do not tend to get married. But are they
making a terrible mistake?
Understandably, it’s not convenient to stick to another man’s habits, tastes, world perception and so on. Sometimes it happens so that a man shows his nature only after the wedding. The negative experience of unlucky couples is so frequent that those who even had never been married believe that marriage is just a ball and chain. That’s why they choose something simple and modern – they constantly change the partner in order to avoid the process of attachment. So, you actually have a good time with a nice man, until he is nice, but as soon as he is no longer smiling and laughing together with you, you just break up with him. No children (even if they are, they are not acknowledged), no hustle, no bustle. It’s easy, isn’t it? It is love at all? If it is, why not to stick with him through thick and thin and get married?
According to the current statistics introduced by the famous web- site Debate.org, 58 percent of people say that nowadays marriage is an old-time tradition, whereas 42 still believe that marriage isn't outdated, it’s just people who are not able to live up to their vows. When you love someone, you take responsibility for his wellbeing, you want to help and stay close wherever Life leads you to.
Anyway, I do not agree with the above-mentioned idea. Most people say that marriage is no more than a stamp in one’s passport, but this is the stamp that shows that you are really responsible for your partner. If you truly love someone why not to get married and show the surrounding that you are responsible for someone’s life?
Even though most people consider marriage to be a useless act of one’s relationships, I strongly believe that marriage institution is currently for those who can love truly …
Understandably, it’s not convenient to stick to another man’s habits, tastes, world perception and so on. Sometimes it happens so that a man shows his nature only after the wedding. The negative experience of unlucky couples is so frequent that those who even had never been married believe that marriage is just a ball and chain. That’s why they choose something simple and modern – they constantly change the partner in order to avoid the process of attachment. So, you actually have a good time with a nice man, until he is nice, but as soon as he is no longer smiling and laughing together with you, you just break up with him. No children (even if they are, they are not acknowledged), no hustle, no bustle. It’s easy, isn’t it? It is love at all? If it is, why not to stick with him through thick and thin and get married?
According to the current statistics introduced by the famous web- site Debate.org, 58 percent of people say that nowadays marriage is an old-time tradition, whereas 42 still believe that marriage isn't outdated, it’s just people who are not able to live up to their vows. When you love someone, you take responsibility for his wellbeing, you want to help and stay close wherever Life leads you to.
Anyway, I do not agree with the above-mentioned idea. Most people say that marriage is no more than a stamp in one’s passport, but this is the stamp that shows that you are really responsible for your partner. If you truly love someone why not to get married and show the surrounding that you are responsible for someone’s life?
Even though most people consider marriage to be a useless act of one’s relationships, I strongly believe that marriage institution is currently for those who can love truly …
Hello Masha,
ОтветитьУдалитьI'm sorry there is the same problem with this essay as with the other one, i.e. that it is not paragraphed. You do have an idea about when and why a new paragraph should be started, don't you?
Hello, I explained the reason of this mistake in my FINAL OPINION(1) ESSAY article. Thank you for being attentive, Natalia Yuevna!
УдалитьPoints to consider:
ОтветитьУдалитьThe Thesis Statement cannot be a question
Strut: That’s why they choose something simple and modern – they constantly change the partner in order to avoid the process of attachment Using the dash this way is common for Russian; in English a conjunction is necessary
have a good time with a nice man(,) ***until (WLinking) he is nice
Style: No children (even if they are, they are not acknowledged), no hustle, no bustle.
Concluding paragraph: Use an appropriate technique for writing conclusions to make your conclusion more memorable
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ОтветитьУдалитьOrganisation: 4
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